Redskin Persuasive Writing

We had to wright a persuasive text on redskin lollies, to persuade Mr Billings to buy us redskins and why.

Redskins Writing

• I need redskins because I have finished all of my homework and have handed them in on time and are up to a high standard.
• I need them so bad because I deserve them after all of the hard work that has gone into my homework that it's just not far that I get no reward for my work.
• They have a great raspberry kind of taste, and are confectionary. They are sugary and gives you lots of energy. They are small sized so you can eat them wherever you want.

 

I need redskins. I need redskins because of all of my hard work and achievements in my homework.

Every week I have handed in my homework and it has been up to a high standard. It has always been in on time and never late. It is always high quality work. I always make sure that it is up to the standard every time, but now since I have done all of that hard work I don't know about you but I think I deserve a reward.

I need them so bad because if you don't give them to me I will get very angry. After doing some hard work that you have done and you get no thanks or anything except for maybe a sticker or something that says “ great job, well done,” that doesn't feel like it is enough. That's when the redskins come into play. You see after doing all of that hard work that took so long that you did in your own time, there is a need for a reward. I have completed all of the homework for this whole term and have done it to high quality. Now I need a little something to show me that my teacher appreciates my work.

Redskins are a great confectionary treat that is A.K.A (also known as) lollies. Many people buy them like my teacher to eat when the kids in our class aren't looking, and then other people buy them as a treat for their kids or something like that. They have a great raspberry flavour to them and are chewy and yummy. They give you a lot of energy and give you that satisfaction to know that you have done well with you work.

This is why I deserve redskins. We won't get them all the time but if we use them as a little bit of encouragement maybe that will help with better learning for future.